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It Was Enough

He rode his horse 'cross the plains wild and free Toward that special place where mountains rise He owed no man, the land was his to see It was enough, 'til he recalled her eyes She'd been sixteen and he had found first love They talked and laughed and gazed at glittered skies While he held her hand and thanked God above The world was his - he marveled at its size Then she was gone, she had just slipped away And he was left alone among the cows He still owned the world and the light of day - He held it close with all the here's and now's Mountains rose and he whistled in surprise It was enough 'til he recalled her eyes September 11, 2016

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Date: 9/24/2016 2:40:00 PM
Larry, I love your poem , I like Charlie's advice :) congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/25/2016 12:19:00 AM
Thank you, Eve...I enjoyed the contest!.Larry
Date: 9/24/2016 2:37:00 PM
Larry-wonderful sonnet dear friend...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/25/2016 12:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, luloo!
Date: 9/24/2016 11:04:00 AM
This is your style, don't change a thing, congratulations Larry...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/25/2016 12:17:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie! What a nice thing to say...Larry
Date: 9/15/2016 5:01:00 AM
Nicely written with a mournful note, Larry. ---Sarban
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/17/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thank you!..Larry
Date: 9/12/2016 3:45:00 AM
This is a good sonnet but there is room to tighten up into a great sonnet. Keith Logan the happy chappy
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/12/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, Keith..I plead ignorance for being new at this..When you say "tighten" I don't know what that means. Give me a tutorial and I'll give it a try...larrybradfield@tds.net
Date: 9/11/2016 9:51:00 PM
This is an excellent sonnet, Larry I really enjoyed the read:)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/11/2016 9:58:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. I appeciate your comment!!.Larry

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