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I dedicate this poem to Broken Wings, an inspiration to all poets here!

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Bha e brèagha an-de (It was Beautiful Yesterday) There was a sailing vessel With many a sail proudly lapping in the wind A flag of the Celtic honor, in ruin an rented As all the sailors sing Of my love for you From long ago Before death became our friend Oh would I be sailing from stormy seas to the Scottish glens To lay some flowers at your side Your beauty is now far under My love ill wait for all eternity For loves resurrection’s stormy thunder Our bodies may be under stone Our memories long lost in tales and fable Let no man ever lay any such claim Our love was not the gift of briny seaworthy fame We be only stones, in a meadow blue When you come upon our fate Tiss with this verse, I state my case The life that escaped our sadly date Love though was true as sky For long ago, she bid adieu Her sadness at my drowning departure As I her lover was told to be Buried deep and under sea Both sadness and the tossing waves Took the life out of her and me So when you look at fading stones Remember the love that used to be

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Date: 2/23/2016 7:33:00 PM
Arthur I love your poem, and the pics accentuated it. Where were those pics taken; location?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/27/2016 9:59:00 PM
The photos are from Scotland, the title of the poem was actually in Scottish Gaelic! Thanks so much I really like this poem!
Date: 2/18/2016 3:46:00 PM
Nicely done, touching tale tugs at the heart. Really enjoyed this one! Congrats at top 3.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/20/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you very much John!
Date: 2/16/2016 6:26:00 PM
True love never dies, boy it hurts like heck though! Light & Love
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/20/2016 11:07:00 AM
Yes at times, thanks so much Debbie!
Date: 2/14/2016 8:42:00 PM
A great piece of love and beauty part of a pie of treasured memories that never fade, nor wither but live on. Great work Arthur And I'll drink a wee drop with you. Cheers Kev
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/20/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Kevin!
Date: 2/13/2016 2:26:00 PM
tres bien
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/13/2016 6:19:00 PM
Merci! Thanks!
Date: 2/12/2016 4:41:00 PM
Fabulous poetry xoxoxoxo
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thank you kindly Aurore!
Date: 2/11/2016 2:23:00 PM
Loved the timeless theme of lost love mixed with the indescribable feeling of staring at a stormy coastline. To read drowning departure is a bit heartbreaking, but well expressed. Good one, Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 8:59:00 PM
Thanks Timothy was a lot of fun writing this one!
Date: 2/9/2016 10:48:00 PM
Great, timeless feel and eternal theme. One for the ages. Nicely done!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 8:58:00 PM
Than you Brian, much appreciated!
Date: 2/4/2016 8:53:00 AM
I see this is 4 in the top 100! At to go Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 8:59:00 PM
So No Gold, Silver, or Bronze, of to the bridge.
Date: 2/2/2016 6:56:00 AM
Congrats penning gem.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank you Iris! :)
Date: 1/29/2016 8:40:00 PM
Beautifully poignant, Arthur. A wonderful poem worthy of the poetess. I see it got chosen as POTD. Congrats! :-)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much Kim!
Date: 1/27/2016 8:11:00 PM
Arthur you are very in tune with this kind of poetry that reminds me so much of the days of yore, the sailors and the tone of old England poetry. This is lovely. I see it was for Constance? Awesome.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/29/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I am doing some reading up on the Gaelic language and came up with this!
Date: 1/27/2016 7:37:00 PM
Arthur, thank you so much for dedicating this poem to me, I am so touched and honored, it is beautiful, I do see myself as that Scottish girl buried beneath the stone, this is a tragic love story you have skillfully penned, of course I fill fav it, and treasure it forever ~~~
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Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2016 7:05:00 AM
And I like how you link it back to your poetry site, awesome, dear friend...
Date: 1/26/2016 9:13:00 PM
Arthur, you have painted a captivating picture with words. Your tale had good imagery. It was beautiful and sad at the same time. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. Enjoy the honor- Alexis
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful, congrats!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 5:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Jeannie!
Date: 1/26/2016 3:29:00 PM
woohooooo congrats to youuuuuuuu on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xxx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 5:51:00 PM
Thanks Jan! hugs
Date: 1/26/2016 3:05:00 PM
Congrats my friend
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/26/2016 5:55:00 PM
I'm getting ready for the puck drop tonight here. It's going to be interesting. Versteeg dissed Johny Toews in the press calling him a baby.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 5:51:00 PM
Thanks Tim, to bad the Habs cant win anything these days!
Date: 1/26/2016 2:18:00 PM
It WAS beautiful yesterday and it's more beautiful today...because YOU got POEM OF THE DAY....A Big 7....Congratulations...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Judy!! :)
Date: 1/26/2016 2:15:00 PM
Breath taking :) Congratulations on poem of the day !!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Birthday girl!!
Date: 1/26/2016 12:16:00 PM
Arthur, your tale drew me in, a wonderful write.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much James!
Date: 1/26/2016 8:48:00 AM
Arthur, I became lost in your words, tumbling with the beauty, whisked away to a Celtic place, the sadness is beautifully penned, entrancing and breathtaking is this write, congratulations on Poem Of The Day, enjoy the honor ~
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 3:02:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings, glad you liked it!
Date: 1/26/2016 7:48:00 AM
So sad and so beautiful, Arthur. This brought tears to my eyes. Congratulations on the POTD honor. 7+Fav, Sandra
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Sandra so kind of you!
Date: 1/26/2016 7:44:00 AM
- ............... and it is beautiful today - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise I just noticed! hugs
Date: 1/25/2016 11:22:00 PM
ohh, i like sentimental flow of this verse; beautiful message on love immortalized, arthur... huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette! :)
Date: 1/25/2016 5:29:00 PM
What a great tale Arthur. Isn't that how all great loves end......bit of useless info : I live on Celtic Circle...who would of thunk it...lol
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2016 11:17:00 PM
The circle of life! :)
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