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It Was a Storm

The quiver of fresh blood never left my hands. It marked me like a permanent stain of disgust. Beauty was underneath the liquid of her mind. The color grey was what clouded her eyes. It was a color of sadness, yet she showed no pain. Like the moon, it only showed its true color in the night. I was attracted to her like a wolf underneath the same covered darkness. She didn't move when the storm approached. She made no move for cover. She stood with a powerful aura that radiated off of her body and into mine. It was a storm like no other. the thunder made it clear of it's presence as it echoed close to my ear. The floor shook with a burning rage. I made no move for cover. I stood like a statue with open arms. Welcoming the storm into my life. The storm ended soon after it ended me. I died that night. Like the rest of this land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/18/2014 8:07:00 PM
Julie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/7/2014 11:52:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Julie- I choose your first great and well written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family"- we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:06:00 AM
Wow! Vivid imagery. Welcome to the soup. I look forward to reading more of your work
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Date: 2/7/2014 8:05:00 AM
Hello Julie, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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