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It Took More Than Myself To Save Me

it took more than myself to save me i was a narcissist without an independent confidence with the wrong type of thinking in my brain, i chose to take the plunge all i got in the end was the honest answer to my imagination's figments it took more than myself to save me i was a brainchild genius without a blueprint's thorough thought with the wrong mode of strategy written lack legibility, i chose to jump right in all i got in the end was a sweat stained pillowcase and icy drool by sunrise it took more than myself to save me i was grown man without a clue as to how to properly display my presentation with the wrong method of approach, i chose to pursue and go for it all i got in the end was a broken heart and my own lonely space to stare in it took more than myself to save me i was a lost soul without any type of concept of an adequate plan with nothing left in my arsenal but an overwhelming collection of prayers, i decided to just fall to my knees, let go, and let God what i got in the end was the naked truth and a slap in the face as a wake up call

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Date: 2/23/2015 12:18:00 PM
This is a nice continuation from your previous poem "I can't help myself so how can I help you". The two poems gives out a good ending as I love the last stanza in this poem. X7. Be blessed.
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