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It made me twitch

I didn't drink the brew because it made me twitch, and break out in hives, every where I itched. She cackled real loud, a high shrilling pitch, and hit the broom stick with a switch, and flew away in the sky with out a glitch. Must still be the season of the witch.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/22/2024 3:38:00 PM

your poem made me smile...it was 'bewitching' and clever with all that twitching. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/22/2024 11:05:00 AM

Dear Nancy, Your poem is a whimsical picture of a peculiar brew and its unexpected consequences. The playful rhyme scheme and humorous imagery create a lighthearted tone that's both entertaining and engaging. Your storytelling prowess shines as you create a tale of twitching, itching, and a mischievous cackle. Brought a smile to my face. - Blessings, Daniel

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 2/22/2024 4:46:00 PM

Hi Daniel, This is really the way I like to write, fast and light. Any thing with more mental strain is too painful and time consuming for this one. Thanks for visiting and your kind words.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/22/2024 8:09:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun/cute write. Have a fun day writing away..........

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 2/22/2024 4:22:00 PM

Hi Paula, It was a quick fun write which I felt I needed to post after the previous poem. Thanks for your visit and all of your wonderful support dear Paula. Blessings to you..