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It Is Never Over

shadows in the sky call up searching eyes just to see dark ghosts roaming like its hosts.   target one hidden a soul forgotten looking for its home fatigued for so long.   deadly silence hang over the misty banks knows it's been found sad eyes look around.   spots a rocky cliff speed right through the mist blinded by the mist the ghosts their mark missed.   Faith to be the key that when fate seems sealed still knows there's a way fate can change to grace.   By CarolineCécile 03.18.11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/17/2011 8:54:00 PM
a very warm and tender piece of beautiful well written poetry.
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Date: 3/20/2011 3:56:00 PM
Keep your faith strong, Caroline. You deserve happiness and I pray you'll find it. So sorry to hear what happened. If you ever want to talk, just email me your number and I'll call. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 3/19/2011 5:30:00 AM
Nice Caroline. Faith and hope is the gift or grace for sure and that gift is love itself. Enjoyed your poem
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Date: 3/18/2011 5:59:00 PM
Caroline this is a rare and beautiful write my friend.. especially luv the second stanza.. vividly describing the soul looking for it's home.. one of the most creative pieces I have enjoyed.. happy weekend luv..
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