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It Hurts

It hurts because I love you still with all unregretable will Time is just a passage way to what I feel everyday Your name your voice the look you left The beauty your memory my heart bereft Your way your charm your graceful alarm your scene your dream the undenighable queen The reason for my suffering in deep regret the longing for your presence though nothing left I place you on a pedistile the goddess to which I cry an invisible idol for which God is denighed All hopes and dreams directed towards you bringing you to my arms for my eternal use Nothing else matters in this world in which I live nothing to replace that for which is the all that I would give For all is reasonable and no crime is cleft selling my soul to the Devil for the one that left For Cynthia

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Date: 11/19/2022 10:49:00 AM
A broken heart can heal in unexpected ways, just give it time... Meanwhile, this is quite an emotive and deeply moving write... Good work, with great rhythm and rhyme...
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Date: 7/30/2022 7:45:00 PM
John, it's in God's hands. You will never get over love, but you will fall again. ~Anaya
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Date: 7/28/2022 2:58:00 PM
I can feel the emotion in this one. Very expressive work. Sara
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Date: 7/19/2022 5:45:00 PM
You'll heal drip by drip, one day at a time through natures grace. Robert
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Date: 7/17/2022 12:25:00 PM
so emotive, John. Sounds like heartbreak of the worst kind.
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Date: 7/17/2022 6:37:00 AM
Beautiful and so sad, John. The poetry deep and heartfelt.
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Date: 7/15/2022 4:28:00 PM
There is no heartbreak that surpasses a broken heart of love lost. You have conveyed this extremely well in this poem John. To my knowledge there is only one way to help the pain and that is to move on and find someone else. I wish you much luck with that. Life is too short to mourn love for long. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:20:00 PM
This heartfelt poem is beautifully written, with great rhyming, John.
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Date: 7/14/2022 5:54:00 PM
A love lost that leaves such regret, Its a haunting feeling, Very nicely penned
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