It Happened On a Misty Morning

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It Happened On A Misty Morning - Collaboration Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Charles Messina. Date: 10/02/2023

Wettened by the morning's dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone. Bright, promising future, at our disposal. When secured with a marriage proposal, Bells of sheer contentment rang aloud Beneath the dawn's slow-turning cloud.

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/2/2023 4:55:00 AM

Edward, first of all thank you so much for helping me to fix the glitch for my contest. Secondly, this is another brilliant write from your magical pen my friend. Unfortunately, I didn't work well with my collaborated poem in which I will be posting. But by all means this is worthy of a 1st place win! Thanks again...Charlie

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/2/2023 10:18:00 AM

You're welcome, Charles:-) That's fine, my friend. I enjoyed writing for your contest nevertheless. I'm glad you fixed the glitch! I appreciate the wonderful comments. Blessings...

Karen Jones

Date: 10/2/2023 9:10:00 AM

I love this one! Good luck in the contest!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/2/2023 10:16:00 AM

Thank you very much, Karen:-) I'm glad you did, my friend.