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It Happened On a Misty Morning

Wettened by the morning's dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone The world was shrouded in the mist, and once again the lovers kissed, but when the fog dispersed, the slaves retreated to their dusty graves...

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Date: 11/2/2023 9:08:00 AM
Dear Jack, your poem is spooky yet rich with imagery of a soulful love that will never die. A grand finale to the Misty Morning collaboration poem. Your poetic talent never fails you and is always beautiful, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/2/2023 4:30:00 AM
Jack, I always judge my contests blindly, but I had a hunch this was written by you. Another perfect ending to my collaboration poem in which I will be posting shortly. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest. All the best, Charlie
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Date: 9/28/2023 6:50:00 AM
I like this a lot Jack! A different twist at the end... smiles1 :)
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Date: 9/17/2023 3:58:00 AM
Romantic but spooky. Halloween feelings already coming out. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
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Date: 9/16/2023 11:01:00 AM
ooh a good poem for halloween jack Hugs Jan xx
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