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It Happen

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It Happen

Can believe it happen never thought it would
All the stuff we been through
Thought we would be together forever
But you was not there even through our loss you were nowhere to be found 
I went through it by myself
I went through depression because of our lost love and child
I am so tired of going up and down around and around
Our relationship was a full speed roller coaster
Always thought we would beat the odds 
Never thought our relationship would lead me to so much pain and tears
You left me thinking if you ever had any real feelings for me
I hope you would come back but you never did
I felt lost without you
Never thought you had it in your heart to be so cruel to us
I finally had to get it in my foolish head that you were gone forever

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  1. Date: 9/13/2012 12:21:00 AM
    Poignant write this! I like how you've touched on different themes. And the acceptance at the end which gives way to healing. Nice!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 12:36:00 PM
    sometimes God has a way of doing things that quizzes the human mind,PRAY, He is holding out His hand to you,sad write,but I see better days ahead Jasmine,welcome to the Soup where we are all one big family

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:12:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Jasmine. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol