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It Feels Just Right

Walking, you and I The wind would whisper our names. Free as we would ever be. Oh how I love the word free. No rules, no expectations, no care in the world. Just right now. Just this moment that feels as if it lasts a life time. This moment you don't want to end. As long as we keep walking, walking, walking the world is at our fingertips. We're invincible.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/16/2016 12:54:00 AM
marsella carello. Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/12/2012 2:14:00 PM
Welcome to you from Norway ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:32:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Marsella. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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