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It Doesn'T Help To Cry

You're confined to a bed with a sweaty smell. And there are no windows as far as you can tell. Food spilled on your covers gathers flies on your plate. And you find yourself in a vulnerable state. The radio's broken there are no books to read. And you can't get a nurse no matter how you plead. Geriatric nightmares await you in this place. And you feel forgotten as the years slow their pace. You know that you'll be here until the day you die. And yet, you hold your tears, it doesn't help to cry. Secluded in shadows, you long to feel the sun. And pray death will come soon, so your time here is done. (Quatrain) 9/23/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 1:11:00 PM
What a touching heartfelt poem, Emile. Extremely well written.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 9:15:00 AM
Fantastic poem about old age, loneliness and the sad state of care facilities of the elderly. We all should understand that fear of our ever being so unfortunate as to arrive there! Adding this gem to my fav list, to keep as a reminder and admire its sad truth. a7
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert, your comments and support are much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 5:39:00 AM
Sometimes the tears do help. You have painted a vivid and sad picture.
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Richard, your comments are always welcome and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 5:17:00 AM
In so many western societies the elderly aren't valued or respected.
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Mark, for taking the time to comment, I agree with you. Emile.
Date: 9/23/2015 9:55:00 PM
Dear Emile What a wake up call for some people, I work with the eldery alot in my job and it's very upsetting on so many levels that I see everyday, I want to help people out but one person can only do so much, maybe this will help others to help their fellow man, nicely done cheri
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Cherl, your comments are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 9/23/2015 9:43:00 PM
What a real life write. So many elderly experience this today. You have written part of reality. Very nice Emile.
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Michael, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 9/23/2015 9:36:00 PM
Gosh, Emile! This is terribly sad. Your write would wake-up relatives of some poor souls thirsting for caring humans and concrete expression of love. Great write!
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Kim, your comments are both welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 9/23/2015 5:57:00 PM
For a vital life to be reduced to isolation and helplessness is one sad emotion for me to wrap my mind around. It is real yet such a cruel winter for some souls. Your poem is well written and as sad as it should be ... CayCay
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much CayCay, your comments are most welcome. Emile.

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