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It Begins

It Begins by Brandie Osborn Secrets told Truths of old Secret lives Killing lies Whispering voices Adult choices Unseen intentions Deadly decisions Reality fades Prices paid Deeper within Crawling skin No end It begins

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Niall Fulham

Date: 5/10/2017 2:18:00 AM

Hi Brandie , great write , it would help if you replied and comment on other works :))) hugs from Ireland

Brandie Osborn
Date: 5/10/2017 3:33:00 AM

That would be ideal however I post the very minute it pops into my head after doing so I forget about it until the next time

Carole Duet

Date: 8/5/2016 10:56:00 PM

Interesting poem...

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/2/2016 8:33:00 AM

I like your philosophical thought, Brandie. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)

Lara Wash

Date: 7/16/2016 7:20:00 PM

Hi Brandie, I was just checking out the new poets and my mouse pointer was on your name, so I clicked and read your poem it rings true because life is a cycle. Welcome

Brandie Osborn
Date: 7/16/2016 7:59:00 PM

Thanks it makes me smile to see someone understands

Skat A

Date: 7/16/2016 4:18:00 PM

Brandie,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2016 10:11:00 AM

Brandie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@