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It All Starts With One

a single raindrop hit the surface of water ripples on wider another tear and more hit water wider pond a river joins in the water turns to lake silver silent lake circled by wooded mountains rocks upon its shores

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/8/2011 7:52:00 AM
Fine Haiku series Caroline, oozing with terrific images, I like it. Many thanks for kind comments. Have a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:45:00 PM
What happens after the water hits the lake? This is a fine example of haiku. Hope all is well with you and yours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/5/2011 8:48:00 PM
I really like how it ended up a silent silent lake after all that rain dropping. An interesting one to read!
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