Islands

Tears shed from lost love Flood the inlets to our hearts... Creating islands. Timothy I. Brumley

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Date: 9/18/2011 6:06:00 PM

Yes, I see what you mean. It takes only a few words and a bright mind to create a profound statement and you have done just that.

Date: 7/10/2010 10:19:00 AM

I do love how you think! It was so nice finding out more about you here thru your little poems. I better get to something else now. LUv, Andrea

Date: 6/11/2010 6:23:00 PM

Nice one - ceating islands into the heart. enjoyed it

Date: 6/11/2010 3:55:00 PM

Very moving image of tears separating people's hearts, creating islands of isolation, Timothy. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Date: 6/11/2010 11:57:00 AM

Love the meaning you put into this one, "creating islands"- lost love can do wonders to us, enjoyed this write... P.D.

Date: 6/11/2010 11:55:00 AM

sad, but true. alot said in a few words. thanks, chuck