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Island Regrets

In crystal seas, on shell strewn pristine beach You stand demurely gazing; out of reach. Backlit by deep persimmon in the gloaming The waves around your ankles gently foaming, An island goddess charged forevermore To hold my heart on this, a distant shore. My pathos spins a mood of bitter sweet Of melancholy ‘mid tropical retreat Unpredictable, this fickle life, and mean, For I must leave this perfect island dream, Return to wife and child on frosted plain And balm my guilty heart with duty’s pain. No valiant knight am I, but loathsome cur For evermore I’ll think and dream of her! August 9, 2017 5th Place Eight-word Challenge Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 8/20/2017 3:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dean
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Date: 8/19/2017 8:21:00 PM
Hi Dean, this is a marvelous poem, just beautifully written! Great use of required words. Love the first line of second stanza. I completely enjoyed this read! Congratulations on your placement! :)
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Date: 8/19/2017 7:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dean!
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Date: 8/19/2017 7:20:00 PM
Beautifully written Dean, you always seem to do well in my contests! Congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/15/2017 5:34:00 AM
Imaginary or real, Dean? However, I enjoyed reading...Have a nice day...
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/15/2017 8:28:00 AM
Fortunately this is imaginary! I would hate to be in this guys shoes. Thanks for the wishes Arturo.
Date: 8/14/2017 11:52:00 PM
Dean I really love this, what a coincidence that is could easily be a prequel to' Slow Hand' or even "Summer Wine", they all kind of go together. We must be on the same trend here. This is definitely a fav, and I don't think you need it but good luck in the contest anyway....Maria
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/15/2017 8:29:00 AM
You know, I thought the same thing yesterday when I read "Slow Hand". Must be a vibe out there we were tuned into. Thanks for the support!
Date: 8/10/2017 3:26:00 PM
how fluid is this lovely work, dean.. you aced it by using the words effortlessly... huggs
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/10/2017 7:58:00 PM
A real compliment. Thank you Nette.
Date: 8/10/2017 12:41:00 PM
So lovely! GL on a deserving write!
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/10/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 8/10/2017 10:52:00 AM
Beautifully written, Dean. Good luck in the contest.
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Dean Wood
Date: 8/10/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Dale. I'm glad this one is fiction. I would hate be in that fellas shoes!

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