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Island of Fantasy

Island Of Fantasy They lost the compass and Drifted towards a glittery islet at dusk Twinkling with thousands of lamps The glow worms enchanted The young lovers to rest while These buzzing stars sang them lullabies Morning unfolded seascapes Of clear shallow aquamarine ripples Where they could look down at corals and shells The parakeets and love birds Illuminated the trees-capes with Bright coloured hues and mellifluous tunes The uninhabited isle was Drooling with sweet smelling juicy fruits Bees, butterflies, birds, gave them an open invite to stay June 8, 2016 For Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 6/8/2016 2:10:00 PM
You painted such a lovely island of fantasy, Balveen, with your brushstrokes of words. Full of imagery and nicely written. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/8/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for your applause, Sandra!
Date: 6/8/2016 1:28:00 AM
very inviting, balveen.. were you able to enter this one?.. good luck!..huggs li
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/8/2016 3:44:00 AM
Yes Nette! Both the days I was able to enter all contests except yours. Are you accepting the invitation?! Love...

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