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Island Grit

Ten years on an island Can that really be? Because living near sand Has been my fantasy. Except when sticky grit Gets into my food. And invades hidden cracks That show up when I’m nude. Well, enough about that, Small inconvenience. I’ll dine on a straw mat, Which makes a lot of sense. And during any hour I’ll get much relief. With a brand new shower Not far from the reef. Oh shucks, now that I’ve picked Two of the items. You might think that I’m licked Yet, I’m not frightened. Sure I don’t have a camp, Or means for a fire. But a nice genie lamp Would fill those desires. It sounds like I’m cheating Though that’s not my aim. Plus there’s no fear meeting Someone to pass blame. Ten years may sound dreadful On an isle so teeny. But not fully fretful With the aid of a genie. For What Would You Take contest, 10/27/13

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Date: 11/9/2013 12:33:00 AM
first stanza is the best one that you could have started this piece with... kudos David
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:57:00 AM
Hi David, , Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :) :)
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:46:00 PM
DAVID , nicely done.... congrats in Shadow's contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/4/2013 4:57:00 PM
Great thinking on your part..If only, but in the world of poetry anything can happen..Creative win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2013 9:45:00 AM
.. sweet congrats on your win, david!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/4/2013 4:18:00 AM
A great answer ,well done, and on you winning spot xx
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:34:00 PM
very clever write and nope it's not cheating...it's one of your 3 items, it just so happens to be one that keeps giving...loved it...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:14:00 PM
Clever clever......congratulations
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Date: 11/3/2013 5:09:00 PM
I love the genie idea....congrats on your win
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Date: 11/3/2013 2:17:00 PM
David congrats on placing in my contest Shadow x smile
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:51:00 AM
sure do like your style!!!
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:49:00 PM
Nice little write with some appropriate rhyming.
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:52:00 PM
Being stuck on an island would be no fun at all / but with the aid of a genie I'd have a ball.
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Date: 10/27/2013 7:34:00 PM
hahaha. With a genie at hand you can wish for most anything, I would imagine, and you need not be alone. Strong contest entry, my friend. To answer your question posed elsewhere, no, not at all. No-one around to pull that trick (lol). It's a very old joke reworked. Good luck in the contest, David. I'm rooting for you. Licia :-)
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