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Island Girl

If I were to be on an deserted isle I'd take a machete to help in building a hut I would live off fish and coconuts I would also need fire which would be kindled by my desire For the beautiful girl I'd take with me who would be dressed in just a smile -------- 10-31-2013

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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/27/2013 12:46:00 AM
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Hi Joseph, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/7/2013 4:00:00 PM
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this is so cool. I thought for sure I'd responded to this one before. And I see you won.BIG congrats.
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Skat A
Date: 11/7/2013 9:57:00 AM
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Hi Joseph, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :) :)
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/6/2013 7:46:00 PM
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JOSEPH, AWESOME WIN.....LINDA
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2013 4:55:00 PM
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Creative thinking for a person about to be marooned..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 11/4/2013 11:43:00 AM
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hahahaha nice one :) congratulations on your win friend Joseph. cheers ;)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 11/4/2013 9:46:00 AM
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a great, naughty one,joseph.... sweet congrats on your win!..:) huggs
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/4/2013 4:19:00 AM
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ha ha love it well done Joseph xx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2013 6:37:00 PM
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nicely done joseph....cleverly penned, congrats on your win :)
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Donna Jones
Date: 11/3/2013 6:16:00 PM
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Ah haha...nice one..Congratulations Joseph...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/3/2013 2:18:00 PM
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Joseph congrats on placing in my contest Shadow x smile hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 11/3/2013 4:55:00 PM
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thank you for my placement Shadow
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David Fisher
Date: 10/31/2013 6:58:00 PM
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I like your way of thinking. Man can't live on coconuts alone. Good luck on contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2013 12:14:00 PM
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- Well done Joseph. . . good choices. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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