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island girl

  If  I were to be on an deserted isle
     I'd take a machete  to help in  building  a hut
 I would live off fish and coconuts
    I would also need fire 
   which would be kindled by my desire 
           For the beautiful girl I'd take with me
   who would be dressed in just a smile

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:46:00 AM
    Hi Joseph, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:00:00 PM
    this is so cool. I thought for sure I'd responded to this one before. And I see you won.BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Hi Joseph, Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :) :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:46:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Creative thinking for a person about to be marooned..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:43:00 AM
    hahahaha nice one :) congratulations on your win friend Joseph. cheers ;)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 9:46:00 AM
    a great, naughty one,joseph.... sweet congrats on your win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:19:00 AM
    ha ha love it well done Joseph xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:37:00 PM
    nicely done joseph....cleverly penned, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:16:00 PM
    Ah haha...nice one..Congratulations Joseph...

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Awesome Joseph, a smile can go a long way congrats on your win xxx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Joseph congrats on placing in my contest Shadow x smile hugs

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    Date: 11/3/2013 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for my placement Shadow
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:58:00 PM
    I like your way of thinking. Man can't live on coconuts alone. Good luck on contest.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 12:14:00 PM
    - Well done Joseph. . . good choices. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)