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Island Breeze

I hear and see: Hot pavement, Green house, Boardwalk, The sound of children's talk The sun, watching all the fun Palm trees Shifting in the breeze Blue sky Green leaves Bougainvillea trees, Red and vibrant That's how you can tell you're on an island

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 11/10/2014 2:29:00 PM

I seem to have missed this one. Nice descriptions of an island scene - you make me envious for I've never been on a tropical island! But I have biked on the beach, at the Oregon coast... that's pretty fun :)

Caleah Buil
Date: 12/2/2014 12:38:00 PM

Oh, you'd love it! And see, I wouldn't mind visiting Oregon, we should trade. ;) Thanks for the comment!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/15/2013 1:00:00 PM

Your list form worked well here.

Caleah Buil
Date: 9/1/2013 2:04:00 PM

Thanks! I wasn't sure how it would be, but it came out better than I thought it would. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2013 2:32:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed your list..Sara

Caleah Buil
Date: 9/1/2013 2:04:00 PM

Aww Thank you so much Sara! Have a great Labor Day weekend!

Sean L Sanders

Date: 8/1/2013 8:46:00 AM

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Caleah Buil
Date: 8/2/2013 3:01:00 PM

I'm guessing you liked it. Hehehe ;)

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/1/2013 7:58:00 AM

A new poem from the "Bull"! =D That's what I'm calling you now. Accept it. Embrace it. =) This was awesome! I love me some walks on the beach. Playful sounds of waves & smells of "bad for your body, good for your soul" food. Count me in! Nicely done!

Caleah Buil
Date: 8/2/2013 3:03:00 PM

LOL!!! I take no bull, I like it, I have "embraced" :P Oh I know, while I was in Nassau I had me some chicken in the bag...dang, I'm on vacation, I'm not going to think of my waistline. Haha! Thanks for your comments as always. :D