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Steaming out on her maiden voyage Lifeboats bob chaotically in the screaming waters

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2010 2:50:00 PM
AHA, could be for the Titanic! I love that phrase screaming waters!!! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:21:00 AM
tragic and definitely heats up the imagination.
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Date: 2/9/2010 5:39:00 PM
UT oh!!!!This is one Titanic verse! Light & Love
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Date: 2/9/2010 4:28:00 PM
Filling in of the lines could write a book. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/7/2010 6:13:00 PM
Tells it all, James, well done...Margaret
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Date: 2/7/2010 2:48:00 PM
Interesting use of the challenging form. I like the personification in the second line. If this is for Brian's contest, best wishes. Karen
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Date: 2/7/2010 2:41:00 PM
Awesome James! Jeralynn
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