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Is Our Love True

Gentle breeze blowing through an open window pane Lying here deep in thought Are you my forever? Are you the one I have sought? Do I really know you? Is our love true? The stars sparkling in the cool autumn night My eyes flash to the sky Do you wish upon a star? Are you gazing up high? Is my future with you? Is our love true? The sun rising over the hills Bringing us a new day Are you watching? For us do you pray? Is there only me and you? Is our love true? Playful songbirds high up in the air Singing a joyous tune Are you listening? Does it make you swoon? Are the notes played for you? Is our love true? My heart beating when I see your face Such beauty I see Are you watching? Do you see me? Do you picture me and you? Is our love true? Gentle breeze blowing through an open window pane Lying here deep in thought You are my forever The one I have sought I know this is true I think I love you

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/6/2014 7:24:00 PM

You know if you throw in a moth and a porchlight you have a contest entry.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/7/2014 8:38:00 PM

haha...I'll think about it

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2014 1:25:00 PM

- Do not doubt the love - Make it stronger every day! - Beautiful written, Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 7:04:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend....hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/6/2014 11:10:00 AM

Ahh!This is so romantic.I love the last stanza which answers many questions.I love the line 'you are my forever'..Forever sounds great when its about love.To my fav

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 7:02:00 PM

Thanks Charma....Forever is what we all want..just hope trust can be there...hugs Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2014 10:49:00 AM

Ahhh!! Romantic work..She just might be waiting..Maybe you need to make a move..Thanks for the visit to my page..I had enough Chili for at least one more..Sara

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 7:00:00 PM

Thank Sara...Hope she still is...hugs Tim

Oluwatomisin Oyegoke

Date: 11/6/2014 2:23:00 AM

Questions. Educative and entertaining.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:56:00 PM

Thank you my friend

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2014 2:21:00 AM

It's a question we all ask at some time in our life Tim I love the lines in the repeated first and final stanzas where you answer the question - inspired write my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:40:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend...hugs Tim

Brandon Harvey

Date: 11/6/2014 2:13:00 AM

Well done , awesome write

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:39:00 PM

Thanks Brandon

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/5/2014 11:04:00 PM

No. Just kidding, Tim. You shouldn't be asking those questions lol

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:38:00 PM

lol ...okay

David Meade

Date: 11/5/2014 10:26:00 PM

these questions pursue the heart demanding a response . . . but only time will yield the answers. Well done!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:38:00 PM

Thank you David

Eve Roper

Date: 11/5/2014 9:28:00 PM

a lot of questions Tim, answer will come when it is time. :) love and hugs from this old grandma

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:30:00 PM

Thanks Eve...I know....just curious I guess...hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/5/2014 8:27:00 PM

Love is Love. I fell in love with a woman I had never met on the Internet. We would Skype. Then I took a four hour flight and a one hour drive to meet her. She got a transfer to my city and we stayed together for seven years. We are still talking everyday but her job transferred her even farther. She was not the type of person that could accept not being independent. Always follow your heart Tim. Oh yeah, great write!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:28:00 PM

Thanks Maurice...I will..and good luck...cheers

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/5/2014 7:40:00 PM

Oh this is wow, Longing for someone is such a difficult emotion, you play the tune well as you watch out the window, time spent in lonely is a lonely rock of hell. but your words bring to life romance, you heart beats with purity, You are so filled with with innocence, in a breeze with wings an angel you will see. Hugs sweetie, what a touching poem.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/6/2014 6:26:00 PM

Hopefully I see that angel..hugs