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Is Love a Trap

And people walk toward the heat, fearing the chills of loneliness. But did they know? Did they know a summer's afternoon turns into a desert quicker than a human's mind realises tribulations? And they are stuck there. Thousands of voices screaming from a well, "Give us water". But you are as arid as the ground around them. The Kangaroo Rat's tail seems a viable follower. What works for him might work for you. However he adapted. Love is no form of evolution.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2012 5:28:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Eoin O Riordan
Date: 6/6/2012 12:19:00 PM
I will be sure to stop by your page sometime. Thank you very much for the praise! Eoin
Date: 6/3/2012 8:04:00 AM
Powerful write dear poet ! Awesome ! Have a wonderful journey here on the soup ! Much love, james
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Eoin O Riordan
Date: 6/4/2012 3:24:00 AM
Thank you very much! I look forward to this journey. Eoin
Date: 6/3/2012 1:11:00 AM
wow it's a strong poem... I really enjoyed it xD welcome to poetry soup hope to read more poems soon
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Eoin O Riordan
Date: 6/4/2012 3:25:00 AM
I read some of your poems and I must say I truely enjoyed them. Even more powerful than mine! Eoin

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