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Is It a Dream

A dream is never just a dream Fractured lies and untold truths Fear of the unknown Infantile thoughts Progressing through hostile youths A clouded vision of many Every night to be seen This nightmare that we all call a dream Before we know it In the blink of an eye Father time is upon us Hearing our pleas of one more One more Before we ..............

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Date: 2/6/2015 7:22:00 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
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Date: 4/30/2014 9:13:00 PM
RICHARD, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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Richard Ferry
Date: 5/1/2014 9:51:00 PM
thanks Skat Rick
Date: 4/26/2014 7:10:00 PM
oh my it looks like you got up a new one that I never saw yet. The ending is very cool because that is just how life will end for most. Abruptly. Congrats on your win.
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Richard Ferry
Date: 4/28/2014 3:37:00 PM
Good to see you..Haven`t written much..Real busy
Date: 4/26/2014 1:18:00 AM
Hi Richard, AGAIN!!! , stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA
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Date: 4/16/2014 1:21:00 AM
RICHARD, it's beautiful to dream.... lovely... Linda
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Date: 4/16/2014 1:50:00 AM
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Richard Ferry
Date: 4/16/2014 1:24:00 AM
what would happen without our dreams
Date: 4/14/2014 2:54:00 AM
- I wish you only good dreams - well written Richard. - Have a nice Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Ferry
Date: 4/14/2014 7:24:00 AM
Hello Anne........

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