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Irretrievable

I stroll a silvered landscape where trees are silhouetted spears, stabbing memories of days first walked with you . . . ice traceries, firey strands of longing lace, wrap the crumbling dream, like brittle, curling tinsel from childhood holidays. A burning stream of cold tumbles seaward, dislodging jagged stones, desire and disgust; wounding barren feet. Backward . . . I trace pink-tinged footprints along the line of demarcation where love once gamboled in innocence before the moon capitulated and collapsed into the sea. Lovely she was, but she is no more. Copyright August 3, 2018

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Date: 1/22/2019 3:46:00 PM
This is so exquisite, Faye, poignant and melancholy, with so much beauty crimped on the edges - love it and fav-ing. I DO hope you return to us ... :-(
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Date: 8/18/2018 6:24:00 PM
Faye, I love your moon metaphor in this beautiful poem. Congratulations on your high placement! : )
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Date: 8/18/2018 1:53:00 PM
Hi Faye, I bounced this among the top winners from the time you entered it - well thought - well presented and a write you can be always proud of. You get better all the time and you started from a high level.
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Date: 8/18/2018 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:34:00 AM
This is lovely, Congrats on your win! Viv x
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Date: 8/16/2018 7:43:00 PM
I adore these lines "before the moon capitulated and collapsed into the sea.! Wow.....this is wonderful, Faye ! Congrats on your high placement with this beauty!
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Date: 8/16/2018 6:28:00 PM
Lovely, Faye. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 8/3/2018 1:17:00 PM
ohh, such a regal, poignant write flawlessly scribed ... glad to read you again, faye... huggs
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