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Oh! Her first flowers never a gift such as this... elegance on grave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/11/2013 8:47:00 PM
Sad but true...an excellent senryu, Harry. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:30:00 AM
Harry, congrats in the senryu contest..LINDA
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Date: 11/9/2013 8:57:00 AM
poignant write....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/8/2013 6:00:00 PM
the joy of the first line crushed by the last....congrats on a great win Harry
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Date: 11/8/2013 5:57:00 PM
Sad, but excellent! Congrats on your win, Harry! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:41:00 PM
liked this,congrats!
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:20:00 AM
Congrats Harry on your win!Loved this.
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Date: 11/7/2013 11:03:00 PM
sad imagery Harry, not the grave...the first time... , Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:41:00 PM
No other title would fit.... Great writing, Harry..... Jake
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:12:00 PM
Love this one Harry.. made me a bit sad...Congrats. BG
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Date: 11/7/2013 4:14:00 PM
Sad and funny. I love this. Congrats, Harry!
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Date: 11/7/2013 3:30:00 PM
the title of this really makes us ponder the irony! Good win, Harry. Congrats to you.
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Date: 9/20/2012 7:22:00 AM
soup xx
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Date: 9/10/2012 12:56:00 PM
very nicely written harry,,,,,, thank you for leaving nice comment on my PEARL ;} you have a blessed day .
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:23:00 AM
Memories of the past becomes green after reading your sweet poem. Thanks for all the comments, Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/10/2012 4:29:00 AM
brings back memories and feelings of what was and the reality of what is as a result. Museful, Harry.
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Date: 9/9/2012 3:46:00 PM
ironic is the gift today, the flowers gone, what did they say... good one Harry mate....Don
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Date: 9/9/2012 1:29:00 PM
Harry; this kinda hits home. I just lost my mom. There were many flowers yesterday on her grave, with a lot of elegance, but to us it was still sad. We were her children and she was our Mother. Thanks for reading my Lost Days of September. I don't have a part II now, but later I will post another one that has two parts. Lucilla
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Harry Horsman
Date: 9/10/2012 4:45:00 AM
i'm so sorry Lucilla for your loss.
Date: 9/9/2012 10:48:00 AM
That a lovely and touching Senryu poem, Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Erich
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Date: 9/8/2012 11:54:00 PM
Visual and ironic and GREAT senryu, my friend. thanks for posting all these new ones. As soon as my life is normal again, I hope to be posting more.
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Date: 9/8/2012 7:25:00 PM
very beautiful. short yet to the point
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Date: 9/8/2012 12:30:00 PM
A great senryu here Harry.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 9/8/2012 8:41:00 AM
Great depth and striking visuals in this senryu, Harry...beautiful - Tim
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Date: 9/8/2012 7:56:00 AM
oh the depth of these creative lines harry luv .. high impact visual luv .. hope u r well . hi to Elaine ..
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