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Vernal equinox lift, sun rays colorize Spring with its magic wand. Bare branches and cold soil, warms to its touch. Irises, like a net looking for butterflies, catch reds, whites, blues and every green bud unfurling. The cerulean sky brighter, the watercan-rain bringing up earth’s babies. Seasonal rebirth. Laud of robins, coo of wintersnow doves, murmuration of starlings — wings land on olive branch. We shout, “Alive! Alive!” We thrive in the trill of adventure, the hope of eternal resurrection.
butterflies in net the whole world in kindly hands irises twinkle
4/3/21 Springtime Haibun Sponsor: M.L. Kiser

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Date: 4/21/2021 12:37:00 PM
A wonderful write and picture. I love butterflies. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/21/2021 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 4/6/2021 8:40:00 AM
This is lovely.. full of great lines.. and perfect haiku to end it..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2021 7:33:00 PM
So glad to see you back! :)
Date: 4/5/2021 12:26:00 PM
This line alone should take you straight to the winner's circle Kim. "The cerulean sky brighter, the watercan-rain bringing up earth’s babies. "
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2021 7:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, sweet friend! Glad you like that line!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2021 7:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, sweet friend! Glad you like that line!
Date: 4/3/2021 12:53:00 PM
Such a beautiful prose and the ending so fitting. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 4/3/2021 11:40:00 AM
Beautifully written haibun Kim, good luck in the contest and enjoy your Easter weekend. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 11:58:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! Happy Easter...may it be wonderful!
Date: 4/3/2021 11:37:00 AM
This is a very well-penned poem, I see it as a winner, wish you good luck, and Happy Easter to you and yours
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 4/3/2021 11:34:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Eve! All the best for the contest ~ Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, Belle! ...Kim
Date: 4/3/2021 10:27:00 AM
This is so beautiful. Love it and I agree. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. Praise The Lord! He Is Risen! JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 11:56:00 AM
Happy Easter! Thank you, Judy!
Date: 4/3/2021 10:25:00 AM
I share Pangie and Jan's opinions about this entry. Good luck with it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 11:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! :)
Date: 4/3/2021 10:02:00 AM
I see a winner in this Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 11:55:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie!
Date: 4/3/2021 10:00:00 AM
wow !:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2021 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Jan! xx

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