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Iridescent Colours

Iridescent Colours Winds whip, murkiness masks the blue, Pearlescent clouds hurry, Birds raise their pitch to suffused hue, Whole scene appears blurry, The coherent torrential flow, Pellucids opaline, Iridescent hues in rainbow, Brewed to get perfect wine! Written April 1st, 2015 on theme 5- opaline By Dr. Upma A. Sharma For nette's contest "Let me feel your lines" Awarded 7th place win

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2015 12:14:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go with your winner..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2015 12:17:00 AM

Colorful in spite of the blurry scene first depicted! Congrats on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/17/2015 1:06:00 AM

Thnx Andrea my dear friend for ur continued support n visit wid words of appreciation!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2015 1:37:00 PM

Enjoyable poem in which your iridescent colours and imagery play a main role, Upma. Congratulations on a lovely win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/17/2015 1:05:00 AM

Thnx Paul! Appreciate ur kind visit n words always! Sorry had been busy for quite s'time n did not acknowledge!

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/15/2015 7:07:00 AM

Lovely, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/17/2015 1:04:00 AM

Thnx Sandra! Appreciate ur kind visit n words!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/14/2015 9:01:00 PM

Some wonderful phrases, congrats. ! BG

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/17/2015 1:03:00 AM

Thnx Barbara for ur wishes! Appreciate ur visit to my page!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:42:00 PM

Dr Upma:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/17/2015 1:02:00 AM

Thnx for ur ever kind support Linda!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2015 6:03:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/17/2015 1:02:00 AM

Thnx jan!

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 5:22:00 PM

Dr Upma, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/17/2015 1:01:00 AM

Thnx for ur wishes n kind words Skat my sweet friend!

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/1/2015 9:48:00 AM

Your poetic wit wraps itself around your words and we are entertained and awed by the experience. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 9:54:00 AM

Thnx Emile! Appreciate ur visit!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/1/2015 8:38:00 AM

A beautiful verse, Dr. Upma...check your syllable count on your last two lines. I'm getting 7 - 5 instead of 8 - 6. Hugs, Rhonda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda! Appreciate ur kind visit and efforts! Fixed!

Asma Memon

Date: 4/1/2015 7:27:00 AM

It's insightful

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 8:52:00 AM

Thnx Asma!

Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2015 6:48:00 AM

Upma, your verse is very beautiful, I love the words and lines, best of luck in the contest, A7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 6:49:00 AM

Thnx a lot BW! Appreciate ur words!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2015 4:34:00 AM

such beautiful imagery - good luck in the contest - I have a black opal I adore the rainbow colours

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 6:51:00 AM

Sorry Jan the comment for Leon landed up here ! Thnx for ur kind visit !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 4:40:00 AM

Thnx Leon my dear poet ! Appreciate ur kind visit !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 4:39:00 AM

Thnx Leon my dear poet ! Appreciate ur kind visit !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 4:39:00 AM

Thanks a lot jan!

Leon Enriquez

Date: 4/1/2015 4:27:00 AM

Dear Dr Upma: Nicely done. I can certainly feel the splurge of colours and the vibrant rise and fall of the mood swing. Leon

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/1/2015 6:50:00 AM

Thnx a lot Leon ! Comment meant for u landed up there with Jan!