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Iridescent

You held me up, and dropped me while I scrambled to stab my heart and I didn't bother, I didn't look up because I knew you would be right there- before me- like you always were- haunting my optimistic soul but while fire caught me and the walls melted- you saved me. you carried me out and then the expectations came and the lies bled through steel- so evident and raw- you severed my heart to steal with pride and now you'll never let me go? You came to me at lowest you left me at my strongest and though I hate you, I've come to love you and all you've put me through as long as you don't drop me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/7/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Iridescent" contest Sarah. Love, Carol
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Sarah Casey
Date: 12/12/2011 3:31:00 AM
Thank you Carol :)
Date: 10/5/2011 4:21:00 PM
Congrats Sarah on your wonderful second place win luv..enjoy for excellent poetry ..
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Sarah Casey
Date: 12/12/2011 3:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda!
Date: 9/21/2011 3:44:00 AM
Sarah,You have wonderful way of phrasing your poetry.It'snew to me .I'll have to read more.Crossfox-
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Sarah Casey
Date: 12/12/2011 3:31:00 AM
Much appreciated William!
Date: 9/15/2011 9:09:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Sarah. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol
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Sarah Casey
Date: 12/12/2011 3:31:00 AM
Thank you Carol!

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