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Ireland Cool Rain

In the mist of the storm__rainbow Mount the rainbow go To the land of rocky clifts__rain Cool, clean water my gain Land of temperatures cool rule For Northern Lights sight drool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2010 11:47:00 PM
This sure is beautiful and you've combined so many amazing natural occurrences here, storms, rainbows & the Northern Lights-- ah those Northern Lights are something that I have yet to witness but I sure am hoping I could in the future!! very nice Sara :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/2/2010 9:27:00 PM
very Irishy with the rainbows and the mist and the rocky cliffs! How are you, Sara? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/2/2010 6:24:00 PM
A lovely write. You takes me there.
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:35:00 PM
A nice pen picture with apt images , Sara
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Date: 8/2/2010 2:58:00 PM
a weather so cool(: if its rain, its still great, even if the water & its wild storm is overwhelming. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/2/2010 11:36:00 AM
A great piece Sara.. like the line breaks to give the reader a perspective on the next word of power... very illusive and whimsical too.. enjoyed a creative read from your gifted pen today.. with luv..
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