Invitation

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Invitation

F-riends or enemies do come along too
R-ise with me higher than yesterday.

E-asily seen here acknowledged by a wave
E-asily noticed there by a nod of the head.

D-esire actions that ring just and fair
O-nly free for the doing.

M-emories for all.

       Jeannie Flinn Furlong
       September 22, 2020
       Dedicated to humanity
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Invitation F-riends or enemies do come along too R-ise with me higher than yesterday. E-asily seen here acknowledged by a wave E-asily noticed there by a nod of the head. D-esire actions that ring just and fair O-nly free for the doing. M-emories for all. Jeannie Flinn Furlong September 22, 2020 Dedicated to humanity Posted to Poetry Soup

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Milton Robertson

Date: 11/20/2020 1:35:00 PM

Beautifully done Jeannie.

Jeannie Flinn Furlong
Date: 11/20/2020 1:39:00 PM

Hello there Milton! Thank you so much! I appreciate your stopping by, and comments. Please hurry back! Cheers!

Sand Blown

Date: 11/18/2020 9:18:00 PM

...nice write......sounds like you grew up breathing in a small town at-most-cheer? .......stan sand

Jeannie Flinn Furlong
Date: 9/22/2021 7:09:00 PM

Hi thete! Thanking you for your nice comments! And, yes, I did gtow up in a small town, Grand Prairie, Texas...a small time about 30 from Dallas, Texas....now, a large town bumping city limits with Dallas. Your new friend, Jeannie

Franci Hoffman

Date: 11/18/2020 1:47:00 PM

A well written and uplifting poem, Jeannie.

Jeannie Flinn Furlong
Date: 11/19/2020 6:28:00 AM

Hi Franci! Thanks for coming by! You certainly got my message "to uplift" others! I enjoy hearing feedback as so many receive the message! Hurry back in January for more-to-come! Looking at 2021 as a new hope year!