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Invisible Web

In the magical mist of darkness Of webs and tangled life Where spiders prey in waiting And moths flutter in their fright Where oceans roar out warnings And lightning strikes the ground Where rains comes down in mornings And winds scream in the night There is a light that’s shining That shimmers in its gold It’s like a peace awaking In life that once was cold. The calming of the ocean The easing of the rain The cooling of the winds came Now that I know your name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/14/2010 12:52:00 AM
This is just lovely, Robyn. I really like it!! Glad to have met you here! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/13/2008 12:39:00 PM
Hi Robyn. Wow, this is so beautiful. Just love how that last line brings it all together. So sorry I missed your latest writes, I have been behind on the soup. Going to check out your others. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/8/2008 11:13:00 AM
beautiful poem with alot passion in it.
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Date: 8/8/2008 4:45:00 AM
What a sweet poem, it reads smoothly and holds a wonderful subject - well done. :)Love Kristin
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Date: 8/7/2008 7:14:00 PM
Well Robyn - This poem is absolutely wonderful - the poem has a great flow and the imaginary was simply divine - It is so nice to read your poetry again - You know I'll always adore you my friend - God Bless you robyn
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