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Invisible To Her Heart

Within the shadow of her light, it's hard to watch an angel cry. Yet how can I not feel her hurt; when for her, I'd willingly die? Silhouetted against the moon, her beauty makes it hard to cope. And invisible to her heart, I haunt the far fringes of hope. Blinded by her aura's splendor, I find I cannot look away. She makes the brightest sunrise seem, so ordinary and blasé. Drowning within every tear spilt, my heart sinks when she's feeling bad. And though she doesn't know I care, I cringe inside when she is sad. But I'm her secret admirer, for she's married to my best friend. And we once took a solemn oath; that we'd be brothers to the end. (Quatrain) 8/29/2015

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Date: 3/10/2018 6:04:00 PM
Ouch! Powerful portrayal of a love triangle. Superbly done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/10/2018 6:59:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/30/2015 1:38:00 AM
Emile, the fluidity of your lines.. descriptive and tragic it is..................... beautifully written!!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/30/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Olive, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/30/2015 1:40:00 AM
love the way you portray the sacrificial, asking without return attributes of loving...

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