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Invisible Pain

An Endless Feeling of Deep emptiness Hides behind an expected forced wide smile Covered emotional pain soothed with pills Numbing senses Questioning The life Quest Think Better Days will come Waiting to reach When the decision of change is taken ____________________________________ For Triple Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper Third Place 7-17-2016

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Date: 7/25/2016 2:54:00 PM
Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2016 11:06:00 PM
Nayda, very good write congratulations on your win :-)
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Date: 7/22/2016 5:51:00 PM
good one on emotional pain, Nayda. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/17/2016 11:30:00 PM
Deep, it is like I am peaking into my feelings.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/18/2016 12:00:00 AM
Thank you for your feedback Sherry. Sometimes, there is pain so hidden, that you forget is there.

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