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Invisible Me

They have eyes to see, but somehow, they don't see me They say they love me, and how important I am to the family. I feel so alone' I can hardly breathe, I guess that's the problem I wear my feelings on my sleeves. They pass me by, going here, going there, but they never speak so I guess I'm nowhere. Invisibility should be my middle name, but terrible breaks is my claim to fame. I've always wondered, when will my turn come, to shine to thrive, to be number one, In the lives of my loved ones, those who care so deep' who has let me down to the point of no sleep. tossing and turning like a merry-go-round, I'm invisible you see, so I can't make a sound. I pretend not to be, not to know, not to see, how they bend me, and break me, like a branch on a tree, That tumbles in the wind on a stormy day, being tossed about struggling, to find my way. Someday they'll wonder whatever became of she, that shadow of a person whose name was me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/15/2009 5:16:00 AM
thanks for all your feed back om poetry, your poems are great too, i look forward to reading more, in many poes it speaks to us in many ways, i can relate your words. God bless from diane
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Date: 4/13/2009 4:03:00 AM
aww whata great poem, I used to feel invisible when i was a child, so i know theese feelings very well, but you will neevr be invisibal to God, sometimes others find it hard how to appriciate us, we so bussy with the housework keeping thnks on top as the saying goes a womans work never does stop, its hard sometimes for others to show emotion but i am sure they care deep down. you are and always will be someone special to God he has a purpose for you, you are and always will be his special child.
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Date: 4/11/2009 1:33:00 PM
I love it, love it, love it. It reads like my own life. jojoseven
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Date: 4/11/2009 11:36:00 AM
emotional poem, Betty, nice! Jim
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