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Invisible

I sit in the back My world is black Do you care? Why stare? You say you see me Yet you don't see The pain I've been through Or the sorrow blue. I am invisible to everyone I want to take a gun Put it to my head I wish I were dead. No one can see me No one will ever see If I am dead Cold instead of warm in the storm. If you have never seen me You will never see. If you never hear my voice You don't get a choice. I never felt the love That comes with a dove. I'm hated Baited into traps And flaps So why do I live When I could be dead Instead.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 1:11:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Justine :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Justine Hansen
Date: 4/3/2016 5:18:00 AM

Thank you for the warm welcome.

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2016 9:59:00 PM

Hi Justine, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Justine Hansen
Date: 4/3/2016 5:20:00 AM

:) Friends are nice. Hugs too. Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2016 11:27:00 PM

Impressed by your poems today Justine, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Justine Hansen
Date: 4/3/2016 5:19:00 AM

Thank you, for such a warm welcome, and for the encouragement and advice you have given. Really, it brings a smile to me every time, and everyone needs more smiles ^~^