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Invisible

She passes him in the hall A friendly smile but that is all She want's to get to know him But never will Invisible He likes her but she doesn't know How much longer can this go? He's not sure how much longer he can last he tries to hold on and wants a love that lasts Invisible She wakes up in the night and cries with a mix of hurt and joy for she sees him in her dreams But reality hits and she knows that it was just a dream Invisible He wants to know the truth in life and then finds her. They finally meet for the first time a true true love that's so divine They are no longer... Invisible

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/25/2010 9:49:00 AM
I like how you show both sides, and how you used repetition of 'Invisible'
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Date: 11/24/2009 11:06:00 AM
this is...amazing...now if only my story would have ended like that. intead he has a gf, cheats on her...okay im guilty for that one...and now we barely talk. and he treats me half the time like hes invisible..but anyways. this is really good i like it =) xo rainbow
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Date: 11/24/2009 4:37:00 AM
Wonderful poetry you present to us today Brittany. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:46:00 PM
Enjoyable imaginative write.
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