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Below is the poem entitled Invisible which was written by poet Serenity D'nae Montgomery. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The outsider,
the girl who doesn't fit in,
the one who hides,
no one knows her within.
She sits alone everyday,
still no one cares.
They treat like she's 
some kind of stray.
She walks through the halls,
with a lonely attitude.
She calmly traces the walls,
with great gratitude.
She's in love with a guy
who doesn't even know she exists.
She trys and she trys 
to get him to notice,
but he's one of those stupid guys
who think unpopular girls are bogus.
At night she crys 
all alone in her bed.
She wishes he would love her,
but he chooses the pretty girl instead.

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  1. Date: 1/13/2010 10:35:00 AM
    when you get older you will realize that there is no "pretty girl" because beauty takes more than a specific form

  1. Date: 10/20/2009 9:39:00 AM
    Your gonna make me sorry you share it too <3 xo Raiin

  1. Date: 4/29/2009 8:31:00 AM
    Beautiful flow of words.

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 9:39:00 AM
    This is amazing, Your a really good writer!

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 8:06:00 AM
    Brilliant, lovely, great poem, Serenity. I like the flow of words, it's very nice. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/13/2009 8:12:00 AM
    Great rhyming