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If you're standing and nobody sees If nobody hears you do you cease to be How much of yourself will you lose to this game Without holding the participants in deep disdain How long will you cry and nobody listen Your eyes seem almost forever to misten Surely it's not supposed to feel like this Something in becoming an adult that you must've missed Be "nice" speak pleasant and all will adore NO It just means your needs are easier to ignore You're worth more than this speak out loud find your voice To suffer in quiet is a personal choice Wanting so badly to walk and stand proud To live to the fullest and live it out loud You've forgotten who you are, forgotten where you've been But remember God sees the pain that you're in This lesson is far too important to miss Study it carefully your feelings you should never dismiss Stop walking on eggshells and learn how to yell And maybe the next time the story will be different that you tell January 2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/4/2009 11:16:00 PM
Beautiful, I love the line "To suffer in quiet is a personal choice" I 100% agree. You should live life to its fullest great write!
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:33:00 PM
Smile~Very loved filled, compassionate and caring dear!:)~"Hello Precious, Gifted and Beautiful Laurie Ginn!!!":):)~Did I ever tell You, how much I truly love "Your" name?! And did I ever tell You, how much I miss "Your" comments!!!:):)~I deeply and sincerely, hope that life is treating "You" beautifully!? Another Perfect Poem Here Laurie!:)~"My Love Forever To 'You & Those You Love,' Always, John!!!"~Beautiful Dreams Dear Lady~Bye!:):)
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Date: 3/1/2009 8:08:00 AM
your not invisible any more as you write with pen and pad
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Date: 2/11/2009 3:34:00 AM
the irony of it all!! beautiful couplet!! loved the rhymes!! by the way my name is ARANY!
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Date: 1/29/2009 9:34:00 AM
Laurie that is a rocking comment. Thanks for always taking the time to read my work. Its greatly apprecaited.
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Date: 1/27/2009 5:19:00 PM
Thank you for the comments on both my poems today Laurie. Hope you are well my friend.
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Date: 1/26/2009 4:40:00 AM
Great piece , Laurie , well rhymed .... Guy goes into his doctor ; Doc !! Doc , you must help me PLEEEEEASE !!! , I am desperate , as everybody keeps ignoring me .. ( sob , sob) It's , as if I am invisible .... Doc ; " Next please " ..... You write onnnnnn ...
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Date: 1/25/2009 5:08:00 PM
misten' (' missing letter g) en'/ing is phonetic dialect and very nice, interesting, colorful. "Something about becoming adult, I've missed?" "Speak pleasant, be "nice" and all will adore, NO!" "Your worth more! Speak out! Find your voice!" "To suffer in silence is your personal choice." "Don't forget who you are. Don't forget where you've been!" "Just remember God seea all the painyou are in." "Study it carefully no feeling dismissed" "And maybe next time a different story you'll tell."
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Date: 1/25/2009 2:11:00 PM
Hi Laurie.. Truth and Irony, so often hand in hand... thought provoking and clever writing Laurie. Thank you so much for your comment on Spare Car Keys... all in the past now, but still sad.
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Date: 1/24/2009 10:28:00 PM
I'm glad you didn't end that one with run like hell, I was already on my tip toes honey and I'd forgotten my tenner shoes. I love it..I even named my little yellow truck Ol' Yeller..smilessss. Girl this nut has gotta get to bed..I might have to go work on some race horses tomorrow. Take care sweetie pie...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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Date: 1/24/2009 8:42:00 PM
Stand proud yet not hauty but with humility. God made you for a unique purpose. This is a thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 1/24/2009 5:11:00 PM
Lovely write...I loved this, it's going in my favorites..Tyesha
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Date: 1/24/2009 5:10:00 PM
Beautifully written, with so much inspiration and directness.. In life you can only take so much..You take and take until you suddenly blow up.I have learned that it is always better to tell someone how you feel, regardless of how they react, you will see that they will respect you more.They will know you are not a push over and that you are somebody..I started yelling years ago and been yelling ever since..I only wish I had the courage before then to stand up for myself..True message* GB Tyesha
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Date: 1/24/2009 8:08:00 AM
Laurie thanks for commenting on my work this morning and the thing I most admire about you is how you read each and every line..its very evident in your comments. Hope you are well. Thanks.
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:04:00 AM
You my lady have spoken my heart... This was a read as if taken an imprint from mine own mind and placing it to the wind for all to hear... Bravo, Bravo *Standing Ovation* E
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Date: 1/23/2009 1:38:00 PM
a very lovely and heartwarming piece of poetry and a beautiful message. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.
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Date: 1/23/2009 10:50:00 AM
Right on sister. Love your words. Not only is this beautifully written it is filled with truth and the beauty of your heart. Everyone deserve to be heard and counted. It is terrible to have to live walking on eggshells, I know! Excellent write here, Laurie. Loveudo too! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:23:00 AM
Great poem :) I'm invisible sometimes too
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Date: 1/23/2009 5:54:00 AM
Beautiful couplet Laurie. Emotional. Keep the faith. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:33:00 AM
I love your style of writing Laurie. So much emotions comes through your words. The message in the piece is wonderful. I know God sees and I need to keep that in my heart. Great!
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:00:00 AM
Nice couplet Laurie...Raul
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