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Invincible Sentinel

thick condensed white cumulus attacking lighthouse's captured inflicting painful terror Angel cold wind rescues by melting enemies frees from cloudy despair leaving no error invincible warrior Angel never fears to fight controls the sky keeping with its fittest might from every angles distance to distance falls sight releases from all kinds of heart pain from plight whole day and night it travels with cool mind watches in silence the happenings surround in need with anger it bursts out at that time destroys the opposite power making sound Sentinel Quatrain Form - Poetry Contest by Eve Roper 9th April,16

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Date: 4/26/2016 12:46:00 AM
I mostly love the last line friend... Congratulations on the win... Bl... Linda
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/26/2016 4:29:00 AM
Thanks my lovely *friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/15/2016 7:25:00 PM
Inspiring piece with wonderful vocab.....congrats
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/16/2016 1:29:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/10/2016 2:33:00 PM
Standing steadfast against opposing forces. Good imagery, BL. gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/10/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thanks a lot from my heart for your beautiful comment with credit and for your heartfelt good wishes my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/10/2016 11:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this gem friend. Thanks for sharing.....love........A.M.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/10/2016 11:35:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation with comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/9/2016 5:44:00 PM
Great interpretation BL. Good luck my friend:)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/10/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/9/2016 4:56:00 PM
very powerful imagery BL good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/9/2016 4:59:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your inspiring comment with wishing good luck. Loved always, bl

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