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Invincible

He lay in the mud being pelted with rain He couldn't understand why he started to fall, He never felt the hit but now came the pain Still a young man, he'd lived no life at all. He was a warrior victory his quest "Forward" the cry, they went over the top, Fearless and brave he'd face any test Invincible, thinking he could not be stopped. Yet there he lay that wet final morn A hole in his chest, breathing his last Helpless now as the day he was born, As he cried for his mother...this warrior passed. Entry for Warrior Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One 7/7/2020

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Date: 7/26/2020 11:37:00 AM
Such a heartfelt sad tale of a brave warrior Gary. Congratulations on your win!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/26/2020 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Aditi. :)
Date: 7/14/2020 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/14/2020 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. :)

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