Intrusive

A crystal fortress of wind blown hills and valley's A treacherous quest Placed 2nd "Journey" A Raul Moreno Contest

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Date: 5/23/2015 11:52:00 AM

interesting, this does not read with beauty like your other haiku

Date: 4/25/2010 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations, Rick! Awesome haiku. You are on a roll with at least two wins this weekend. So happy for your well deserved honor! Love, Carolyn

Date: 4/24/2010 5:00:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick, on your number 2 win!!

Date: 4/24/2010 3:44:00 PM

very nice congrats on your win faleshia

Date: 4/24/2010 2:06:00 PM

Congrats on the win Rick- snails ARE really brave

Date: 4/24/2010 1:38:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your second place win in the Journey contest... perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Date: 4/24/2010 1:26:00 PM

Rick, congratulations on placing 2nd in my contest...Raul

Date: 4/24/2010 6:44:00 AM

OH!! I love this one Rick!! A crystal fortress....what a beautiful description this is! Well done!! ~ Carrie

Date: 4/23/2010 11:06:00 PM

Nice expressions. Good luck