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Intrusion of Thought

Cushioned with green, warmed by the sun Blue sky above, clouds on the run Clovers three, with luck four clusters Sharing laughs and belly busters Pulling grass to make thumb whistles Picking flowers avoiding thistles Grasshoppers jumping blade to blade Soaking up sun, avoiding shade Ladybug, red, on a daisy’s white petal Flies away as the heart back peddles “He loves me” was the last petal plucked “Does he really?” the intrusive thought struck © Debra Squyres

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/18/2014 2:56:00 PM
What a delightful and inspirational read. Love that last phrase....the intrusion of thought! You are a smart person and a wonderful artist who knows how to paint with words. Bravo my friend!
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Date: 8/26/2014 12:07:00 PM
- My thoughts went to a happy childhood ... playing and happy summer days - A lovely poem, Debra - Thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2014 6:14:00 PM
Very nice. For me couplets just seem harder to do. I always have to take longer when composing couplets. This is very good write.....
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Date: 8/21/2014 2:29:00 PM
A beautiful lament of tender days of memories and childhood ways. Such a sweet write with that ever present peek into reality. Peace. :)xx
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Date: 8/21/2014 2:21:00 PM
"He loves me” was the last petal plucked “Does he really?” the intrusive thought stuck"..I like these lines even though using an old idea..Very good couplets..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hadn't finished Propinquity and was hurried therefore did not put unfinished on it..I am still in thought about it ..Thanks again..Sara
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