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Introspection

INTROSPECTION I nside the lint gathers N uances of furtive details enmeshed in navel’s web T orturous thoughts of imperfection’s inadequacy thrive R eveling in the soup of synaptic suspicions O ne day the navel will reveal its findings S uccessfully disclose the meaning of this mindless meandering P rove the viability of my existence – my mindfulness E xamination does not make a life worth living C onclusions offer neither an end nor a beginning T reason may be a turning away, or a turning towards I nside the lint gathers O ffering answers that ask questions – seeking answers N uances of furtive details enmeshed in navel’s web 6/22/2016 submitted to – Introspection – Poetry Contest sponsor – John Hamilton

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Date: 7/6/2016 10:02:00 AM
Way to go ...congrats on your winning work..I like the metaphors used ..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2016 4:38:00 AM
Congrats on your placement John, with this wonderful piece in the contest!!! ;-)
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John Lawless
Date: 7/1/2016 8:08:00 PM
Thanks Teddy, I've done a bit of "naval gazing" in my lifetime.
Date: 6/22/2016 5:51:00 PM
Well done, John! I like your use of alliteration. great acrostic.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/23/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Kim, ya gotta toss in some poetic devices to break the "prose" barrier

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