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Introducing Me

There are people at my school slightly different then the others they are the only ones who shine their own colors They laugh like us They cry like us but they never create a huge fuss They are different they are proud they are the ones in their own crowd I am like them so i say i am different every day

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Anonymous Jones

Date: 7/16/2015 1:05:00 AM

kind of weird capitalization going on in the last stanza. the first I is capitalized and the second two are not. the first letters of the first two lines of the second stanza are capitalized, unlike the rest of the poem. aside from that its pretty solid. kind of funny how being like someone else makes you different a la the last stanza. i think this poem could hit a lot harder but im not entirely sure what youre getting at.