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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/2/2011 7:42:00 PM

Hi Wilma, Thanks for the comments on my poems. Always appreciated. Happy New Year! ......Jimmy

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/31/2010 4:41:00 AM

Going back to catch up what I missed, and nver disapointed.. Beautiful word usage and poetry my dear... luv Michael

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/30/2010 8:33:00 AM

Oh dear, I just saw that my comment was added three times, but it was not my fault but that of Soup! Sorry for that and have a great time....Gert:)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/30/2010 8:32:00 AM

Hi Wilma, I guess that something is quite wrong with soup! I typed the right characters for my comment and then "incorrect" showed up. No idea why!...Gert:)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/30/2010 8:30:00 AM

Wow Wilma, I guess I cannot cope with all for comments, you were really great with writing so many poems. Lovely Choka you've penned here! Hope you'll be having a great start into New Year!...Al die beste and take care...Gert :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/30/2010 8:29:00 AM

Gert W. Knop

Date: 12/30/2010 8:28:00 AM

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/29/2010 4:47:00 AM

Wilma so happy to see this rare beauty topping the Hot Poems Chart today.. enjoy all your magnificent writes... here is a Happy New Year toot from Ron and Me and the boys with luv...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/28/2010 9:42:00 AM

baby steps is all that we need sometimes-- very good thoughts you put in here Wilma :) & thank you so much for dropping by my blog :) hugs to you :) enjoy the rest of the year & may 2011 bring you more inspiration :) nikko :)

James Peranteau

Date: 12/28/2010 7:03:00 AM

A powerful lesson here dear poet in poetic write ! I'm sure there are souls here on the Soup who's hearts were lifted with your knowledge. Have a wonderful New year Wilma ! much love, james

James Fraser

Date: 12/25/2010 7:21:00 AM

A delight to read this Christmas Day Wilma. I am looking forward to following your wonderful poetry in 2011. Have a lovely Birthday / Christmas Day....:)xx

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 12/24/2010 9:35:00 PM

Gud one. Merry Christmas to U & Ur fly. Luv/best wishes......Hitendra Mehta

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2010 7:30:00 AM

deep in ever step,,, enjoyed your poem,.. have yourself a wonderful x-mass and the best new year God bless,..p.d.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/24/2010 6:32:00 AM

Very touching,Wilma.Brilliant attempt to guard against frailty.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/23/2010 5:24:00 PM

Wonderful Wilma, just love this. All the best for the festive season, and a happy 2011. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/23/2010 4:14:00 PM

The rod to recovery is filled with small steps, Wilma, as I'm sure you know from the important work you do. This is a message you should share with the women who come to you for help. A poem filled with hope! Merry Christmas, dear. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/23/2010 10:54:00 AM

Love will heal all wounds if given the chance, WIlma. Warm little Choka! Blessings, Peace, joy and happiness to you always, Love, Audrey

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/23/2010 9:48:00 AM

i like the beautiful slow motion tonality of this sweet piece, wilma... just reeling, especially the conclusion of your ending..! huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/23/2010 8:53:00 AM

Superb write Wilma dear friend.. lovely touching endearing lines .. feeling the intense emotion in every line .. enjoyed with luv..

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/23/2010 7:19:00 AM

A beautiful write Wilma that describes what a broken heart requires to heal. I love it! Lay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2010 6:16:00 AM

This is an interesting little poem, Wilma. I especially liked you last two lines, teaching oneself to be in unison with another by just slowing it down! I am really occupied with my mom here and grabbing a bit of free time here. Can't really do the blogs anymore.But I want to keep up on my good friends' poems! Luv ya, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/23/2010 5:04:00 AM

Nice poem Wilma.A bruised heart needs tender touches and cautious steps to heal.

Deb Wilson

Date: 12/23/2010 4:38:00 AM

yes love can heal sometimes..very nice Wilma...best wishes for your holiday season and in the New Year too! love,Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/23/2010 3:47:00 AM

Nice imagery to display intricate steps unifying to get healed, Wilma