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Intoxicated With His Trance

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I met him on a cold, sultry winter’s day, A cold, sultry winter’s day in July. He stood, hands reaching out towards me, And peered so deep, deep into my eye. He was strong, independent, exquisitely proud, I was drawn to a kiss from his lips. Was I insane or mad? What was I thinking? Willingly heading for my own apocalypse? I needed to turn, leave then, right away, Run, flee, hit the road, take to flight. He was a funnel web spider, he’d kiss for a kill, His kiss was a deadly poisonous bite. For my worst fear contest, June 20th

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Date: 6/22/2016 9:29:00 AM
Creeeepy!!! yeah that ranks pretty high on my biggest fear list !!!
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Date: 6/21/2016 8:53:00 PM
That would certainly rank high in the fear catagory. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/20/2016 4:59:00 AM
Ooh!! That's scary! Well written:) All the best:)
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