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Intoxicated Rondeau

Intoxicated Rondeau Totally intoxicated in prime movers’ immortality Never hidden in punchy illusion Broken heart dips into sacred circus hilarious absurdity Images of staggering lightheadedness - cleared vision fusion. Stronghold built on the perfect harmony suffusion Of love’s author – dizzy with tipsy truth’s reality - Distilled Spirit's healing balm - giddy epiphanies in profusion - Totally intoxicated in prime movers’ immortality. Shouting slaphappy cheers for reveries tonality Elevated toast to the holy love’s effusion Gleeful, inebriated, rolling peals for grace vitality Never hidden in punchy illusion, Staggering in your waves of affection’s conclusion Dropping rags of shameful brutality Revelations of solace in my heart’s seclusion Broken heart dips into sacred circus hilarious absurdity Released, then freed from frost stagnation’s legality, From enigma’s toxic labyrinth exclusion, Torn temple curtain reveals forgiveness jubilee Images of staggering lightheadedness - cleared vision fusion. Giddy epiphanies of Eden love resolves confusion Eternal elixirs of glee banish banality In sweet essences my “I” consumed without occlusion Saturated by the great “I Am’s” affusion totality. Totally intoxicated. 6-8-22 Contest: Rondeau Redoubled Sponsor: L. Milton Hanks

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Anil Deo

Date: 6/14/2022 5:07:00 PM

ThanX for yr visit Sam. This is good; last stanza superb. I am learning about this form; shalom - shalom

Anil Deo
Date: 6/17/2022 5:28:00 PM

the "spirit" of your poem ... spoke to me Sam, thanks

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/16/2022 9:45:00 AM

Anil, thank you so much! For me when God shows up, which God does every day, it is a totally all consuming experience leaving me breathless and feeling "intoxicated" immersed in God. The Rondeau and Double Rondeau are such interesting, intricate, forms. Writing in these forms was a delightful challenge. I am so happy that you liked the result of my efforts. :) Blessings of shalom coming back to you!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/10/2022 8:24:00 AM

Now this is excellent poetry, creative, intense imagination, and totally intoxicating. Certainly best for a win my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/11/2022 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so much dear friend! Touching the fingertip of God is a totally, overwhelmingly, intoxicating experience creating a sacred obsession that is unforgettable and only creates a deep desire for more! I know you have had this kind of experience for it shows in your faith! It is a joy, and a gift, to share our God obsession! Hugs and blessings!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/9/2022 11:23:00 AM

Love it. :) Best wishes for a win. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/9/2022 1:00:00 PM

Thank you so much Gina! Your lovely message lifted my spirits today! Hugs and blessings my friend!