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intoxicated by entwined souls, breasts beating, breathing in the amalgamation of us. trust in lips, tongues, stress of otherworldly communication. neo-occasion of bare skin, slightly shy, surrendering to the shift and slide— sensuality played portentously… innocence irrigated… blind. intoxicated by the itch; you scratch my back like a kitten. my feet and knees find your warm precipices of carnal knowledge. together we learn there’s an inner universe; exploration of mysterious habitation. in practice, in habit tingling of dendrites over and over again. intoxication’s jealous— jumps for joy at your touch… knows where your headed north or south… intoxicated by extremes, the shudder of sensuality, shamelessness of dreaming in your bed, calling only your name, stamped with approval— our’s, story comes to a climactic conclusion— Your Welcome. 9/9/2021 “I'' Contest New or Old Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/8/2021 4:36:00 PM
Love between lovers perfectly described through your sensational poem Kim, beautifully done… Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2021 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, Belle!
Date: 9/15/2021 5:51:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done, I like the image chosen too ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2021 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Date: 9/11/2021 6:11:00 AM
Powerful passion, seduction at its height, , a very pleasurable, richly seductive, well constructed poem. I applaud this write, excellent! This is a definite win! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet Jennifer!
Date: 9/10/2021 9:23:00 AM
Wow! Sensuous and beautiful all a single pulse. This is outstanding. You get a favorite!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2021 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 9/10/2021 6:15:00 AM
I am intoxicated by the sensuality of this poem, Kim. Wow! I am at school, no shower in sight.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2021 9:37:00 AM
LOL! Thanks, Caren!
Date: 9/9/2021 1:41:00 PM
Whew! Where is my fan! Kim, this is very descriptive and expressive of passion. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 2:53:00 PM
Love that you needed your fan! ~ hugs
Date: 9/9/2021 1:13:00 PM
Passion overflows Kim! Great write, perfect title! Best for the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 9/9/2021 12:49:00 PM
Well done Kim an excellent expression of sensual intoxication, the ending (your welcome) brings empowerment to the woman, yep you kept your head, brilliant cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 2:53:00 PM
Thank you! Love your comment :)
Date: 9/9/2021 12:00:00 PM
Great writing, Kim. A winner for sure! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 2:52:00 PM
Thank you! ~ hugs
Date: 9/9/2021 11:16:00 AM
Wow! Kim, Good luck in the contest.Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/10/2021 11:48:00 AM
Hello Kim, You are welcome my friend. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene
Date: 9/9/2021 11:13:00 AM
A very sensual write Kim, you've written a breath-taking poem; your wording Is flawless, and you portray your thoughts with astounding eloquence. Blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 9/9/2021 9:19:00 AM
Wow! Beautifully written with just the right measure of sensuality and passion. Loved it, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Milton! :)
Date: 9/9/2021 8:57:00 AM
A very sensual write Kim, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 9:01:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!

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