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Into the Wild

INTO THE WILD I dreamed ...... An arboreal wandering into the wild Creeping in narrow-leaved green herbage Afraid to be mashed by other wolverines got riled Their safe abode is now in the siege The rampage and stampede make a harsh noise Joining the rumble will stumble into near-death Swiftly moving away, intend to do a ploy Taking hold of strength and a grasp of pure breath Chasing the weak and hear the piercing shriek of pains The fauna now in a vain attempt to meet and regroup from the maze A lurking prowler just outside ready to take his aim A Carnivore’s rendezvous dealing another round of faze Forays refrain them from regression Marsupial bearing young is watchful and vigilant For a hostile entry, a swift run from apprehension Saving the younglings and safely back to Taiga so verdant With balsam fir’s magical warming in winter and cooling summer Tall trees get blown over osiers, shrubs, and miniature spruce Hear the wind swayed the trees gently just like a hummer A walk to wet spongy forest ground that has a soft carpet of moss A truly look at life into the wild is precarious Feeding on flesh and a quench from trickling stream Some nocturnal species tending to be gregarious To survive in this biome is a short-lived dream Previously posted in voicesnet.com poetry site last 21 October 2009.

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Date: 1/12/2011 5:30:00 PM
Gosh,just when I think i have read all your poems, I stumble onto something I had not yet seen. This is most unusual. I see it was a "dream" Had you seen the movie, I think called Into the Wild? some great new vocab words in this one for me. I just loved the way you described the trees in stanza five. Great imagery. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/27/2010 11:22:00 AM
This is awesome. Visuals are amazing. Flow of words rock. keep it up, your really tallented. ~rainbow
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your dreammmmy poem today.I love the express yourself, when u wake up 2 know it is only a dream. LOVED IT
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Date: 3/21/2010 3:18:00 PM
Well done. I like the near rhyme in verse 4. Thank you for your kind remarks. I appreciate it very much. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 3/20/2010 10:38:00 AM
Good use of imagery to share this dream. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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Date: 3/20/2010 8:56:00 AM
Villarosa,--enjoyed today!!
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:06:00 PM
Well written and scary as all get out for the poor victims eh? Good luck Noel in the contest. Thanks for your comments! _Robert
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